What gets cut can make the story stronger

Developmental editing can be hard. It's about taking a swing at the big chunks and sometimes knocking them out of the game. I may have kept the skeleton of my story, but a lot of the "organs" were transplanted with newer, better functioning ones.
So two things:

• Look to the side and find some newly added cut scene material from the story. I added a cut scene for each of the main characters.
• Check out Ingram Elliott the lovely publishers of my novel.

I'm excited to inform y'all that I sent in an author bio and photo for the book. The picture was taken by my talented sister and hopefully they like it as well. Those are the updates for now. Keep reading!